Could you correct my English?

I study English.

I wrote about how to eat a tofu (Japanese foods) for my friends.

Could you correct my English?



1. okara------%26gt;Okara cooked with soy sauce,mirin,sliced carrots,burdock root and shiitake mashrooms.

2. soybeans milk-----%26gt;Mix soybeans milk and banana with blender.

3.momen tofu(firm bean curd)-----%26gt;momen tofu and minched pork cooked with soy sauce,toban miso.

4.kinugoshi tofu(soft bean curd)-----%26gt;hiyayakko ( cold tofu with soy sause and sprinkle green onion,dried bonito shavings and ginger)

5.yose tofu-----%26gt;eat it without cooking

(optional warm it put such as green onion, ginger, syoyu, yuzu , dried bonito shavings)

Yose tofu is soft and lightly. The street of the throat is feelings good.



That`s all.

Thank you correct for the check.Could you correct my English?
Your English is pretty good from the looks of things, so congratulations on your progress! First thing though, you never need to put an s on food. Maybe you know that and it was an accidental error, but still. Food is one of those exceptions where the singular and the plural are the same word. Like sheep or fish. Anyway!



1. Okara - Okara cooked with soy sauce, mirin, sliced carrots, burdock root and shiitake mushrooms.

2. Soybean milk - Mix soybeans, milk and banana in a blender.

3. Momen tofu (firm bean curd) - Momen tofu and minced pork cooked with soy sauce and toban miso.

4. Kinugoshi tofu (soft bean curd) - Hiyayakko (cold tofu with soy sauce. Sprinkle with green onion, dried bonito shavings and ginger.)

5. Yose tofu - Eat without cooking. (Optional: Warm it and eat with things such as green onion, ginger, shoyu, yuzu or dried bonito shavings.)



(I'm not sure what you mean by ';The street of the throat is feelings good,'; but I assume by writing street you mean something about the throat as a passage, so I'll just correct this sentence as I see fit.) Yose tofu is soft and light. It makes your throat feel good.Could you correct my English?
1. okara------%26gt;Okara cooked with soy sauce,mirin,sliced carrots,burdock root and shiitake mashrooms.

2. soybeans milk-----%26gt;Mix soybeans milk and banana in blender.

3.momen tofu(firm bean curd)-----%26gt;momen tofu and minced pork cooked with soy sauce,toban miso.

4.kinugoshi tofu(soft bean curd)-----%26gt;hiyayakko ( cold tofu with soy sause and sprinkled with green onion,dried bonito shavings and ginger)

5.yose tofu-----%26gt;eat it without cooking

(As an option you can warm it , adding such ingredients as green onion, ginger, syoyu, yuzu , dried bonito shavings)

Yose tofu is soft and light. It leaves you with a good feeling on your palate.
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4.kinugoshi tofu(soft bean curd)-----%26gt;hiyayakko (cold tofu with soy \\\\\sauce///// and sprinkle green onion,dried bonito shavings and ginger)



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5.yose tofu-----%26gt;eat it without cooking

(optional warm it \\\\\';and add things such as'; or ';and put things in like';///// green onion, ginger, syoyu, yuzu , dried bonito shavings)

Yose tofu is soft and lightly. The street of the throat is feelings good.



\\\\\I don't know what you mean by ';soft and lightly'; or ';the street of the throat';



do you mean ';soft and fluffy';? or ';soft and light';?



';street'; is the thing a car drives on.



do you mean ';it makes the street of the throat feel good'; or ';the street of the throat feels good';?
1. okara------%26gt;Okara is cooked with soy sauce,miring,sliced carrots,burdock root and shiitake mushrooms.

2. soybeans milk-----%26gt;Mix soybeans milk and banana in a blender.

3.momen tofu(firm bean curd)-----%26gt;momen tofu and minched pork cooked with soy sauce,toban miso.

4.kinugoshi tofu(soft bean curd)-----%26gt;hiyayakko ( cold tofu with soy sause and sprinkle green onion,dried bonito shavings and ginger)

5.yose tofu-----%26gt;eat it without cooking

(optional warm it put such as green onion, ginger, syoyu, yuzu , dried bonito shavings)

Serve the tofu yose soft and lightly. The aroma of this dish feels good to the nose and throat.